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1. Why did I choose this topic?

I choose the topic, because I have some interesting about parents and control. I see people, who scolding their kids, and yes there are many reasons, why parents act like that. It’s because they need some time to think about things etc. and I know friends, who their parents are under stress, because they minds blow up, when they have so many things to do. The children need some love, heard and understand by their parents, and without these reasons will the child get problems through his live.

• Many parents have the control over their children:
Many parents have control over their kids. If the parents don’t have control over their kids/children, they will be helpless, because kids need someone to watch them and protect them from this world. In this world there are so many problems without solutions, when we are teen. The only two people we can trust are our parents, and when we speak about their relationship, there are difficult challenges between the children and parent.

• Why do parents need to have control of their children
They control their kids, because they are afraid for something could happen with the child.

• Why do parents want to control:
Denmark has lesser problems with drugs than the USA, but example Florida, which has many young students in High – school, where drugs are naturally, and the problem is their parents don’t know what the students do outside the door. Therefore, when they come home will the parents be more attentive and more controlling.

[Uzay K.]

Salam,

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1. Why did I choose this topic?

I choose the topic, because I am interested in the topic of parents and control. I see people scolding their kids, and yes, there are many reasons to why parents act like that. It’s because they need some time to think about things etc. and I know friends, whose parents are under stress, because they minds blow up when they have so many things to do. The children need some love, to be heard and understood by their parents, and without such basic social attention the child will get problems throughout his live.

• Many parents are in control of their children:
Many parents are in control of their kids. If the parents aren´t in control of their kids/children, they will be helpless, because kids need someone to watch them and protect them from this world. In this world there are so many problems without solutions, when we are teens. The only two people whom we can trust, are our parents, and when we speak about the relationship between kids and parents, we find difficulties between them.

• Why do parents need to be in control of their children
They control their kids, because they are afraid that something could happen with the child.

• Why do parents want to be in control:
Denmark has fewer problems with drugs than the USA. An is example Florida, where many young students attend highschool, where drugs are availablefreely. The problem is how their parents don’t know what the students are doing once outside the door. Therefore, when they come home, the parents should be more attentive and more controlling.